rap songs dont need words
i like the intro part being separate from the main body of the song. the main body also is really good. if u wanna get insainly technical i would say maybe have a bass melody in the hearing threshold that compliments the drums, just to harden the loop and add a little more continuity. also maybe turn the bass down cause theres a bit of feedback throught the chorus and verse. the scratching works really well and the goodnight sample suits well. sorry if my analysis of ur stuff seems over critical, i certainly couldnt do any better, im just offering an opinion. keep goin with the hip hop beats bro, its sounding sweet!!
This is the kinda review I like, tips to help me improve the little things in my beats, so thanks for that. I always have trouble with the bass because i have a sub, so it's hard to judge whether or not another person's computer is going to take the sound.
The beat was fresh,.. but you have to consider that rapping over this can be a bitch though..
You've got them breaks in the beat that aren't really flowing with the whole of the track...
It can be be fresh ,.. but if ya rapping with a chorus the 'untimed' break is a bitch.
other than that the beat is tight...
Thanks malkay for ur honest review. I Usually don't do beats specifically with lyrics in mind, i guess i need to work on that. But yeah, thnx for the review, sorry i couldn't get back to u sooner.
wow thas all I got to say the melody wuz tight as fuck u gettin a ten and 5 from me thas all I got to say the bass is crazy u made my cpu shake and everything I had my subwoofer up
good shit man u have skillz and as I said be4 fuck tha haters
Ayy i appreciate ur comments u've always been supportive, so thx. I had my subwoofer up too, and dare i say, it was dope. Now i gotta review some of ur stuff.