Sorry, bud. I despise loops. But turn this into a song and I'll 5 it for sure. Sounds pretty nice and I believe it has potential.
Meh, I have no idea how to review for audio...
But oh well.
This one was okay. It's a pretty nice tune, but you need to end it not so abruptly. It just seemed to end, leaving the listeners in the silence. You should make it a loop so that it ends similar to how it begins, or something like that.
Hey, I don't know much about creating music, but this is just how I imagine it should be.
Your friendly neighboorhood Hentai. ;)