Different, but Good
This is pretty different from most of your stuff, and from most of the music I like, but it was still great. That's a sign of major talent, making something different, that is still great. The only suggestion I have is that the beginning could have used an explosion or two in the background.
Ever thought of making a small film with this?
I was very surprised about this song. It would be the perfect soundtrack for a movie intro or credits. It kinda sounds like a man walking through a futuristic city with aviator shades with his hands in his jacket while he passes by crime scenes and it starts raining or something. you should really think about making a film with this soundtrack in the opening credits. even better, make more of these kind of songs without the choir or the bass! perfect music background music for an investigation scene!
A top secret agent spy is running away from the cops, when suddenly he sees his sanctuary, a church. He runs in, feeling nostagic about his past, when his mother had left him there 27 years before. Suddenly, he finds himself in a crazed state of mind and begins breaking everything in sight. Finally, all bloody and bruised, he walks out, leaving the church to wonder.
^ My analysis of song. Haha.
I love this song, it has a great feeling to it, really lets you float on the melody, im not sure how to describe, it really takes you away yknow?
the on thing that i think is not positive is the intro; its too noisy and too, how to say... i dunno (is not english btw) but anyway, i think you should have just kept it without the intro. actually the shooting and the police car sounds arent that bad, what really ruins it is the sounds the other cars make, the sound is out of balance, those cars are much louder compared to the rest of the noise, which is pretty muffled i think, which is good.
Could imagine this being used in the opening of a film or game.
"In the year 2022 Society crumbled. Crime evolved. Crime became a virus that spreads from city to city consuming everyone and everything it touched. It took less than two years for the the Southern States to fall under gang rule and even less for North America to follow suit. With the county gripped by war, with Gangs on one side and the National guard on the other it was not long before the whole of the United States was a blood fuelled battleground. With millions dead it was decided that an Exodus would take place. The entire country would be evacuated. On July 16th 2025 the Exodus began. With cities left as smoking shells and entire states devastated by the ensuing war 350.000.000 people left the shores of America hoping to escape. I was not one of these people. I was left, along with thousands of others in the cloud shrouded city of New York. Abandoned.
I need to escape. I need to get off this country, and I will.
By any means possible.
This is my story"
Wow that was some really nice story , i can imagine it on a game :D
Ruben -Acid Paradox-
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.