gave a few of your songs a listen
this might be old, but i guess i'd be rating you back then, well anyways.
this song and a few otheres sound like youve got style, but no composition.
what i'm trying to say is that you need to figure out a nice base tune before you start adding all that flare (like the "tweedleys" and the "doodle-dats"). the problem is not that you can't compose, you jsut need to spend some more time working with the music generator that you use.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.