I guess it's your first, can't downtalk about it too much.
I'll try to give some ideas to you.
The static I hear throughout the song - Should go, It get's to be hard on the ears after about 30 seconds.
Your trancegate is fine, However - I think u should mix a few notes at a time, and hold them for a bit longer. Then add your leads, kicks, stuff like that.
The leads you add in this, don't really match the mood that your trance-gate sets, and sound like it goes off-tune.
However, this is only your first - so I'm going to keep an eye out for your future work because i think you have some potential!
Keep it up!
Well... Uhhh >.< I'd have to start over. I don't have the free version, therefore I can't save project files.
Could use ALOT of work.
This being your first trance, i'll hold back on alot of critisism. But to be honest, it doesn't sound all that great. That could change though, I know you could have the knowledge and creativity to make something with progressiveness and beat. But for now, you are stuck with randomly placing notes on the piano rolls. I really hope you get better =)
I'll fav you because i'm a very nice person :)
Please check out some of my work if you have the time, I haven't been getting alot of critisism or even listens lately :(
Thanks.. I think o.O