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Uploaded
Sep 5, 2009 | 2:15 PM EDT
File Info
Song
4.5 MB
5 min 40 sec
Score
4.18 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.18 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
544 Plays | 43 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Trance
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Author Comments

I am still making songs so be prepared for an on slot by the end of today. I have more stored up waiting to be published. Now about this one.... um. well I don't really have any inspiration when i make music i just make it. lol. so enjoy.

Reviews


sharpeye1sharpeye1

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Okay wtf?

This is clearly your best song, and it is absolutely amazing and professional in every single way... why the fuck is it the only one with a whole bunch of criticism?? This song is actually so good I am going to put this shit in my Ipod... The real amazing part is that you made this song when you were fucking 14... the fuck?



DJ-TomEDJ-TomE

Rated 3 / 5 stars

lacks suspense

sure you have a bass chorus a melody a beat and special effects but the song has those same things through out the whole song. the only part that deserves credit is the part at 3:15. if your going to make it a 5 minute song i understand why youd use fill-ins but sadly those do nothing but make your song longer. listen to songs on this website (one person in particular which i cant quite remember uses 10 tracks in almost every part of his song the puts it down to for the key word.... suspense. those 4 periods even resemble more suspense than this song. no hard feelings but dont be lazy with fill ins. 10 tracks is hard to do but 5 of them where all backgrounds as a supportive branch. hope this helps you. i would like to see a redone version of this 10x better

-TomE


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veteranpie responds:

Well i don't think i was to lazy. i just was trying to get a long song. but if you listen closely you find that there not a same part in the whole song that is more that 9 sec long.


ZolzerZolzer

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

good ideas

you obviously know what you're doing with the clap. well placed! most people mess that up badly. hi-hat needs EQing. put a lowpass and a highpass on it, then compress. synths sound kind of depressed. turn up the resonance on the leads. kick sounds decent, but a kick like that should be used in a faster song. impact FX are good. if you're going to have a weak-ish bassline, you really need to go heavy on the pads. there's a gap in your song where a strong orchestra pad should be.

bit around 4:22 was artistic, but didn't fit. percussion sounds overcompressed there.

message me if you have questions! im looking to meet some people. i make techno too.


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veteranpie responds:

Thanks! i tryed to do good with the clap. i will do better on my next song with the passes. I understand i should have made the tempo faster, but i needed a long song now.
Thanks for the review.

-VeteranPie (AKA) Spartan-029