not to bad

yea i agree with the guy below ulll always have someone whos pissed off and looks at ur work and feel like being an ass. Anyway good job and u need vocals and somthing else seems to be missing

Cool

I checked out the other song, i think this is an older version maybe? anyways, some @$$ gave u a 0 rating... i'll give it a 5 just because i do like it, but doesn't deserve quite the 5 cuz i think this is your other song, or close to it..

great job man.