Not bad. Not great. Sorry...
Sometimes intriguing, often just messy. It's not bad exactly, but it's lacking a real hook. Parts where you use the whole keyboard work the best, as it sounds like you already know. There was a part near the beginning where your higher notes were lost in the murk of the echo (about 1:36). I love delay as much as the next guy over, but everything, even delay, is good only in moderation, and this piece needed less, if not none. Also, are you recording your keyboard with a mic? If you are, and if you care enough to, but a better mike or find a way to play directly onto the computer... MIDI works nicely. Just my 2 cents...
thanks for your feedback.
Yah. I know that the quality wasn't its best. You can blame my low budget and MP3 mic (the only one that's mobile so I can take it across my room and record.) for that. heh
My keyboard I was also aware with, did produce some congested notes there.
I also understand your point when you mean only in moderation for the echo effect. The song does sound nice without it. I'm still rather new to being a song artist on this site. though my forte is in animation. lol
so echo and fun stuff like that still sounds rather nice to me. lol perhaps due to it gives it a surrealist feeling to me. I'll learn. heh
But ya, thanks for the tips. and btw how much can a midi deal cost?
until then, I'm sure my music wont be as top quality.