I wish this track had a few more transitions, but on the whole it's extremely well mastered and I really like the complementarity of the synths you chose. It just kinda felt though that from beginning to end the track didn't really GO anywhere. Same themes kept popping up over and over again.
I'd suggest adding at least one section that breaks the mold a bit... maybe a hard break beat, maybe a really big chorus somewhere, I can't say for sure. All I know for sure is, at 5:00 in length, this track needed something more to keep me interested for the whole 5 minutes.
Another idea might have been to change the beat up a few times here and there. Otherwise, it was really easy to listen to for about 2 minutes. I say, either shorten it up, or change it up a bit.
very helpful stuff thanks a lot dude
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