Have serious potential...
Saw your comment on the alpha test. Understood what you meant by bass roll when I heard this. Now to some criticism:
The background piano in the first part right before the breakdown could be a tad fuller and perheps have some lower keys stuck in there somewhere. And a little less repetative maybe?
Other than some mayor mixing with the kick and the hihats(some clipping issues) awesome song. Just ad a rich main melody with a smooth saw or a cleaner buzz and you have a killer.
thanks man and yeah this is only a work and progress and I have a lot to do but thanks for the criticism. It always helps a ton.