Ok see I love this! I hate it when I see people say "Oh well u didn't remix it enough!" It sounds freakin great so WHO CARES?!? I like remixes where it is changed a lot but not always...this keeps the original beat while mixing up parts! Sometimes going crazy with the mixing is ok but in this case what you have done is great! :D
Well done, but...
The problem I see is that it's not remixed ENOUGH to consider it a true remix. I hear where you changed it up, but I would have liked to hear it even more different. Think about kicking up the tempo and adding more effects. Just keep it different than the original yet recognizable enough.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.