My review, your song.
Kick should be Eq'd to play above synths. Their pretty bass heavy, and the sound covers the bass allowing for easy head bobbing appeal.
Gated basslines are real chill.
Drum line is very simple, audible, but not spectacularily well mixed. Emphasis and forground sounds are certainly the synths.
1:20 Bridge is nice, I quite liked the little splashy sounds and bells. I think more would have kicked up the song quite a lot.
1:48 synth sounded way lower quality then the other sounds used, it stood out in a bad-contrast kind of way for me. It goes on abit too long unchanging for my likes.
Progression is slow, but occurs.
3:00 release could have happened sooner I think. Its a great repreive into 'chorus' (if you'd like to call it that), but it happened after too much of the loop repeating prior.
Piano addition to the chorus made it start going places. I think you should crop out small sections of this song, and work on the piano's melody and this will be a real kickass-track worthy of boasting having made.
Ending crash was very quiet and week. I think it could have used much more grandeur. Couple hits, stereo, added bass/delay, reverb, maybe an explosion (but execute it in a not so cliche way.) Maybe feature a bowling pin sample or something random just to add one more touch of audio information to make this more memorable.
You're theory teacher should be pleased that you're making your own advances outside of class.
To Rayray, and others wondering, its nearly Wednesday, theres a lot of 0 bombing going on so that songs have no chance of getting top 5 of the week.
this piece is sick
teacher should be proud
if ya can check out my new track D@nce
This is tight.
Dude, you did great. I bet your theory teacher loves you. Peep my shit if you get a chance. I've been getting zero bombed for no reason. Not even a review to tell me why i suck so bad.
thanks man and will do.