I found this to be quite the charming peice. As stated below, a better mic can help out. However, a better mix of what you have could help too.
Some simple compression and stereo seperation would make this go a long way.
As for white noise, I didn't find it that bad, however you can sometimes use an EQ tool to lop off a very small section of the frequency range and remove the white noises range. (Often its in a small uniform range thats easily removed)
Loops excellently, and I'm glad your alive and well.
Wonderful. My only complaint is the quality. I'd like to see you purchase a better mic, and get rid of all of that white noise! You are a talented guitarist. Please check my latest submission if you get a chance, man. Peace out.