We have different tastes...
I actually enjoyed the end around 4:00 and on.
Great to hear. You're rad.
You Should ..
Try to do some Dubstep Songs, it sounds like you would be able to pull it off, with just a little wobble bass here and some irregular beat patterns here you can pull it off. this song was good and all but i feel it was lacking some more pronounced melody that would grab your attention. I like that you experimented with some electro somewhere around 3:55 it would have been cooler if you used that as a bridge to a new beat pattern to refresh the song. But not much of a fan of the weird pseudo trumpet that you used towards the end it sounded kind of cheesy but its not big deal.
Thanks alot man. I appreciate the advice
This is pretty awesome. Its experimental. Ive made some experimental stuff, but this sounds awesome. I love the tune. Drums are awesome, melody is wawesome, voice is awesome! Good work keep it up!. Those guys below are asshole retards.
lol, the guys below aren't asshole retards, they're actually really helpful. Thank you for the review though, i appreciate it. I'll hit you back with a few myself.
This is bad
I do agree with the reviewer below me though that synth is a lil weak. idk what synth you used for it but it needs more of a kick to it. maybe lower pitched. I'd also change up the choir synth mess around with the knobs till you get a better sounding choir for it. I'd probably lower the pitch on the choir too.
anyways 5/5 & 8/10
keep working on you music, making music is also one of the things I truly enjoy.
Thanks alot man, i appreciate the review.
My review, your song.
0:40 I found the new synth rather weak. Once it gets a bit more layered it picks up.
Intro sample is dandy. Only thing I would do to it is to crop each word and fit it all into the rythm/beat. (But thats fiddly and not for everyone.)
Bridge near the 2 minute mark was good for the change of pace given first 2 minutes were pretty uniform.
2:35 shows promise of more excellent to come.
Bass returns, I think the song from here could have evolved much more differently from previous in the song for a good impact and song structure, but frankly the songs still smooth and chill.
Theres a sound that by my guess has the FL Love philter on it, and at about 3:43 and I think it player earlier in the song. It sounds discordant to the other noises playing and is easy to place a finger on its creation, which as a writer myself often detracts from the song when its so discernable. If I'm wrong let me know.
Song has an outro - rare on here. Good to have included.
Unlike most of your peers you have a passion. Hold onto it, and ignore the low scores of some of your songs. NG doesn't have much of a palate for this kind of stuff. Its not happy, its not DnB, its not a single strict formulaic genre, so you're gonna get dinged with some down voters.
5'd and 8/10. Keep up the work, never laze out on writing.