Industrial -> noise
I'm sorry, but it started out so promisingly. I think that from there, you get a little carried away and it just seems that every new sound you add just contributes to an aural assault. Perhaps consider cutting some of the instruments, to give you a more relevant sound - it's music, not the sounds of an actual production line. If you're gunning for the production line sounds, move along the line, so that one part comes out, as that process is complete and a new one starts, thus perpetuating the track.
I think that the major flaw here is that you've got 17 seconds of silence at the end of the track. That's awful and so easily removed. Take that out and the track is instantly better, as you can expand it by a minute or two, lengthening the processes and allowing for more time to spread things out and be less cluttered.
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