Its Almost There...
I really like what you are doing here, It has a very original type feeling to it.
[Even though its not.]
I do like the vocals, but they do get repetitive. [The background vocal]
However, I really don't see how you could do the song properly without them.
[Try adding different vocals in the 1:06 - The End]
But otherwise, its a very nice song.
5/5 and 9/10 <-- You'll get my 10 and download when its revised. (^.^)
Hope this helps,
i agree totally with your view
Its great but the buildup takes way too long i though it was going to get to some thing huge at 0:12 and it doesn't realy get good till 1:30.
Everything else is great you just have some rearranging to do.
I like the voices alot too.
i may actually use an acapella instead of the vocals, i think it would suit the song more
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.