and writing. But it needed to be much louder. It was a powerhouse, but it lacked the impact it could have had. Especially in the percussion.
I think what this needed most of all was a background atmosphere of bass notes. The guitar handles the high range of sound well, and the piano compliments it well, but the drums are too low and as a result nothing really rounds out the bottom level of the sound.
Pretty enjoyable piece overall though.