wanted to comment quite hardstyle..

until i saw your comments. haha. but still contains the element of childish lightheartedness. nice. i may add that it is a bit contrasting, to mix hardstyle to your cute music. but its still refreshing. and its not THAT hardstyle anyway. haha.

Mixing needs work.

Your main synth is way to loud. You need to compress it slightly to kinda make it flow more with the rest of the song. Everythings just kinda bam in your face wich makes it hard to enjoy the song. When the song actually quiets down a bit at 1:04 for the breakdown its a LOT better. Everything is nicely mixed in at that part. However it goes RIGHT back to the same problem making this hard to listen to. Remember This kinda music doesn't have to be UBER loud to be enjoyed. Keep up the music and good attempt thus far!

Wyldfyre1

Pretty Good

Its Pretty Good. dont really have much to say, but it was a bit repetative, in some parts, and then @ 1:15 it just kind of, skipped to a different melody. :) 5'd