But yeah, it made me chuckle.
It would have been more suitable if this was submitted on Talk Like A Pirate Day, and used in your flash. Seriously though, this was alright. The voice got a little annoying when it got high-pitched.
You had to submit it before Talk Like A Pirate Day so someone could animate it.
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If Weebl really is paying you a staggering amount of money for "(Additional Animation)", maybe you should have invested in better recording technology so that your microphone wouldn't tear every single syllable.
Couldn't really hear the punchline with all the tearing but it probably wouldn't have made any difference.
The joke was something along the lines of him going on YouPorn and then seeing something that's generally displeasing. Unfortunately, your voice acting dropped out and you just ended up screaming in your own voice which generally isn't the least bit amusing.
I don't think this is even going to amuse your 13 year old fanbase, let alone a large audience.
I think ever since people started being funny for you, you've lost what little sight you had left of what's funny and what isn't. You've got enough money, right? Hire a scriptwriter.
And buy a razor.
You like Lucky Star and you have a neckbeard.
Sort both of those things out.
I'm sure you can sort both at the same time with a razor.
In before the amazingly witty authors response. Then deletion 2 days later.
In fact, do that. That'd be hilarious. Completely out of character.
The end made me giggle, but you sound so muffled! D: The quality is so crummy...it really takes away from the comedy in the skit.
If you can redo this, please make yourself sound clearer and add some background noises. :)
Sadly I have crappy mikes and a rather noisy laptop, so it does end up a bit morphed after noise cancellation.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.