I'm going to start reviewing your stuff more harshly because you seem to have levelled up to the next level of music making ;)
The riff, rhythm, drum beat etc. are all great and there are many strong points about the song but listing these in every review will take me a long time so I'm just gonna get down to what you need to improve.
At 2:42, instead of having that synth play that melody have a light piano do it with a delay on it, try that and you will see how good it sounds :)
You need to take away the power from the synth, the emphasis of hip hop style music is usually on the drum beat, its what drives the song, so perhaps make the synth quieter at parts
Theres slight clashing at 0:36, sort out the volumes and it will sound much better
Apart from these and perhaps slight arrangement problems/preferences it sounds pretty decent mate :) normally i would give 10/10 but now im reviewing harsher for your own benefit
HA HA yes! sweet dood thanks that means a lot that you think i have leveled up in my music making... i took a lot of what you have told me and that has helped me a so much man so yeah thanks a bunch and i will try that stuff out and ill re-post this song sometime in the near future
it's a pretty good idea, there just needs to be better mastering and a different choice of synths wouldn't be bad. at :58 things got really unorganized. I'm gonna give this a 7/10 because it wasn't bad and i'm assuming you don't have too much experience using a music making program, not try this was bad, but it could use some work here and there.
It gets unorganized but i bring it back all together... if you dont think im that good at music maybe you should give a few of my other songs a chance.. try the song The Musical Movement, City Night, and The Music That Moves You... i appreciate the review tho and the rating thanks a bunch man.. i think you should give some of my other music a try tho... Maybe listen to Take it Easy if you like guitar too cause i also play the guitar.. The song Guitar Shit is also another really good song of my i think its better than Take it Easy