Ahhh, the trials of a lusty pirate!
I envy people who can make rhyming couplets and they don't sound awkwardish! Your reading could use a little work - but the poem itself is sound! Also, the repeating background SFX was a little distracting - best just to find some sea SFX that can go the full distance rather than something that's on a 5-second loop.
This was a learning experience for me so constructive criticism is just what I need. Thanks for being honest.
It's okay but i didn't like to much. The sea sound in the back is nice.
Thanks for the fair vote man.
Meh...kind of a weak voice
wasn't a whole lot of pirate-y-ness in your voice. And when there was, it quickly went away when you got caught up in reading the poem. I like the poem, but the tempo was very mechanical and dry. i felt like there could've been a bit more emotion and exaggeration in your voice and tone. Good job, though :D
I would have added more things to do with my voice but I wanted to be sure I stayed within the time limit. Plus I was trying to make sure people could understand what I was saying. Still, not bad for my first attempt at voice acting.
Thanks for the review! :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.