Good sound ideas, but no familiarity
I say this because if you hadn't put in the author comments section that it was a DBZ related song, I would never have recognized it as such.
I think your vocal samples need to be turned down juuuuust a tad. It sort of starts to get a bit overpowering, and some of your sounds could use some Reverb, such as the prog.cymbal at 1:25, or 1:41. I mean, that could make it sound a bit better, in my opinion, but im not 100% sure how accurate adding reverb to that cymbal sound would be relative to how they do it in DBZ. ANYWAY, I think the flow of the song is very awkward. It almost seems as if they have a 20 second dialogue, then fight for about 3 seconds, then go back to dialogueing (or breathing heavily talking to themselves in their head, which Goku is VERY fond of lol) And the abrupt cut off is kind of a let down also. I usually prefer some sort of anticipated ending, or atleast turn it into some kind of loop. Again, just a suggestion.
I think this song has some potential, just needs a lot of mixing and fine tuning.
Thanks for the Responce. I agree. The sound is to high. I "WILL" make an update and add an ending. it seems a bit difficult to turn this into a loop ehh?
Again Thanks for the Review!