It's pretty ok, the only friggin problem is I'm already DJ Runaway, and I got it ©:P So better not go pro with it man :) You have potential, but try using hardware... Software has alot of cons, especially the DrillNBass drum loop of Fruity Loops (I use it 2, FLP Studio 5.2 XXL pack)
Anyway, keep it up, experiment some more and become big man :)
Like the drums...
Please alter that melody at some point.. It was good other than that.. come on switch things up a bit..