I quite enjoyed this :D. Really not bad at all ^^.
The melodies are a win. If I had to go through this song, I wouldn't dare touch these awesome melodies. I especially liked the melody 0:43. Very nice choice of intruments too, but there were really just two or three instruments playing at the same time mostly in this song, so adding another instrument, maybe some alternate melody with a plucked instrument at 0:43, to give it a maybe more climatic feel.
The transitions were excellent for a small song like this. I was impressed by the drum transition you did at about 0:41. The structure is really good as well, and it never got repetitive. The intro started the song very nicely, and had a catchy melody to it as well. Still, when I was reading your Author's Comments, I expected this to be a loop. As a song, it sounds OK, but I think you should add more melodies between the beginning and 1:11, and then take away the stuff from 1:11 onwards, and loop it, if you want it to loop. It'd match much more to what you said in the Author's Comments.
The drums were very good and varied. I especially liked the drums at the beginning, and the effect you did at around 0:57. The drum samples were excellent as well, and they fit really well with the song. I just think the drums that appear at around 0:14 were slightly too loud and I could barely hear the melody.
In all, a nice little track, with awesome melodies, instruments, transitions, intro and drums, but adding another plucked instrument, lessening the drums at 0:14 and maybe making it loop would help a little. In general, good job, keep it up :D.
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