The bass doesn't work well in the beginning (either too loud or too fast/repetative) ... Try making it almost soundless in the beginning
i am guessing that this is one of your first tunes, so i would say it's pretty nice.
It takes time to be experienced, and if you don't give up you will do very well :D
I'll take that into consideration, i was trying to have it build up, and then eventually get into the melody. I've created about 5 songs, (all of which suck except this one)
so im just trying to get the hang of it, and the style i like.
Thanks A lot Bud =D
It was an okay song.
The beat was a bit generic though. Try to mix up the hats a bit but dont dont go to crazy with so that it sounds gay. The ending was a bit low too. End it with a couple instruments at least, not just one. I have to admit though that the piano was golden and that your not bad at making melodies. You should probably choose instruments that sound good together though. You were mixing things together that are in completely different genres like happy hardcore, drum n bass, and dance. Also, mix up the beat a bit every other measure or so. Don't make everything different, just switch it up. One more thing, let the eurogate come in better than that, put like a snare roll or something in it. No not a snare roll, put in an egg on from some of the preset songs or something close to it that sound like a gust of wind. Overall it was okay, just too generic. Put some emotion in it for me okay?
P.S. Where'd you get the high pitch noise you used in the section changes?
Alrighty, thanks for that buddy. I'll try to mix up things a bit more, i just thought i should keep it relatively simple, i want people to groove, not say WTF, you know what i mean? and yeah, i probably should have ended with like a mellow cord or something... but now i know for next time :) ..and the high pitch noise, that's just a 3xOsc and i messed around with the pitch.
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