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You're intro lead is cool, and it got me interested at first, but to be honest, I'm not a huge fan of the rhythm of the drums. They have a weird off beat to them that I'm not quite sure really fits with the lead very well.

The synth that comes in at 0:27 sounds to come in off beat and a little off key, but I think that's the rhythm of the drums playing tricks on my ears. It's also a very overused synth and you should play around with other settings and try adding some effects to it. I'm not saying not to use the effect, but at least play with some ways to give it a slightly more unique sound.

I don't think that the arp at 1:46 fits at all. You don't have any bass and it hurts the overall sound of the track, but the random switch to the arp is just uncomfortable. You need at least a better transition.

Overall, this track has some flaws. Try playing with some new sounds and not just using presets. Even if you write the song with the presets and then play with them and alter them to make your own sound I think that would help.

shexoda responds:

Thanks for the review.

Im not that good at making music.
And the drums are off beat yeah i found that out earlier.

- Shex

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Aug 24, 2009
5:06 PM EDT
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2 min 42 sec

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