just that one word to disribe its awesomeness "Epic..."
a minor hint;
the only thing i can maybe see is to keep the sub freq bass exactly as it is, just add another bass in there of the same sound just play it one octave up. i have a sub myself so its not a problem for me, but to those out there who dont have a sub...
OR, just make the lowest notes louder? (specifically the low one in your break)
the 2 highest notes are right abut the perfect volume for this...
as of that, a DL, a 5'ver, and a 10, to you you sir,