It's a good start, the violin melody is well written and the percussion is used well. The bass/cello harmony is good, but repetitive. You should have different instruments take over the harmony, and change up the harmony as well, you used the same thing for pretty much the entire song, except for one portion where the violins stop playing.
The song has a bold feel to it, you should add some horns to add to that feeling, make a bigger sound.
Also, don't end the song the same way you started it, make an ending.
This would be good as background music for a video game or something, but for foreground music, you need to expand upon it and add more.
Yeah, I was trying to experiment with horns but my VSTi was giving me some funny business so I just gave up on it.
I think you're right, I really need to start experimenting with more instruments and changing things up subtly.
Haha the ending, yeah I know... But a few ideas kept falling threw so I said screw it, I really need to not do that.
Thanks alot, very insightful and I'll be taking these tips to my next work.
really has the feel I think you were going for.
it's adventurous, proud and uplifting.
at times the notes of the low strings and the high strings are discordant which sounds a little distracting but it's not too noticeable.
great work, I liked it a lot!
Yeah I was really going for a proud and 'the adventure' is over type of thing.
Yeah, I can see now that it does clash mildly here and there, gotta work on that.
Thanks alot for your review.
I liked it
It was quite nice to listen too. Although I thought some of the sounds clashed, this could just be passed of as your style.
sure... lets call it my style, that's easier.
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