Way tooooo long and boring, man! Cut the repitition that can be achieved with a loop. The second guitar is really annoying. Shake things up a bit man.
It was pretty good, but it seems like you just took a drum, bass, and guitar riff, and just repeated them over and over, that is, until the second guitar came in. I would have rather heard a 1:30 second long loop version, at least then it would make a nice background song for a game or movie.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.