I liked it it was pretty damn good i have to give it to ya you did pretty well.
Im starting to like you alot :P
Anyways i thank you for all the time your giving me!
its review time bitch
ok i liked the phazy kind of horizon sound in the beggingng, the slow kick should have come in with a crash, would have had more impact.
The bassline moog that u used is nice, but it could have been a little more varied.
Then u used simsynth. Was good, but then along came sytrus.
Sytrus owns simsynth.
Anyways, that little arpo thing that u have going with just the kick and then the moog is very nice. very nice build up.
But then you bring in that damned synth that you used in the begginging. I already wasn't fond of it. And then to blow the sound lvls over you throw in the simsynth.
I like it when it all stops and its the arpy thing with the chords in the backround. nice touch.
The slow kick is nice, but again, needs a crash.
About now im wondering why u didn't bring in an open high hat and clap. Then i realised something. Its the end of the song, and u didn't give me that rush that most techno songs do with the nice, solid beat.
This was jsut a kick and closed hh.
sorry, but i despised ppl who cant throw in a good beat cause it'll over do the sound lvls even more.
Anyways, enuf of my bitching.
Good song, just change the beat and the simsynth and add a solid lead chorus instrument. or at least turn down the volume.
sry if i was too over critical,
Imnot sure i followed but i think you said its ok but would be good if improved.
To be honest, i completeley agree, i went into this techno phase for a while a made lots of techno, it ended up with songs that have potential but were not fully finished. So if i had the time i would finish them all up but instead im gonna start composing new techno with the knowledge i have now acquired from University and continue with my classic
Thx for your time though
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