I like the Asian stuff, but it would sound cooler if it was faster because that violates the generic asian music style.
It has potential...
This beat is a bit too repetitive. Perhaps if you varied the kick pattern more and separated the song into a distinct structure. Also, some snare fills would do it some good. The snare should be louder and the claps should be quieter. The constant open hats on beats two and four also gets old fast, a steady hi hat pattern with occasional open hats would sound better. It also needs a bass line! Of course, this is all my opinion.
However, you do have some very good oriental riffs and ideas in there. If you take the time to clean this up a bit and add more variety, it would be excellent. Keep working on it.
- Arron -