sounds pretty "badman"
yo dude, sorry i havent been replying to anything lately or reviewing your stuff, been really busy, but thanks for checking out my songs, really appreciate it, anyway, on with the review:
the melodies work very nicely together and the instruments are great, i like the style of the drum pattern, it has a nice rhythm, i think that you should add a more powerful snare at some point to give it more of a punch like songs from the dubstep genre, perhaps have it more punchy on the second snare cos its dum dum snare dum dum dum snare or something at the moment, make it dum dum snare dum dum dum SNARE, and this will give it more power
what you need to work on also is the arrangement of the song.
heres what i would have done
1) when you introduce the instrument at 0:24, bring it in from quieter to louder but instead of arpeggiated version, make it a single note one so it can build up with a clear sound, then perhaps arpeggiate it just before the drop, get rid of the beat from the beginning up till 0:41 where you bring it in from a quiet to full blown. at 0:48 have a slight pause, then bam incomes the full blown beat with the emphasis on the snare i mentioned earlier, also vary up the melodies in the early parts, you can be really experimental during the build up and show your skill here but when the beat gets going it must be constantly the same/similar to keep it flowing
just take some of it into consideration, it may or may not sound better, and sorry i havent been keeping in touch, youve really improved and this is a banging tune :)
good stuff, keep it up mate
ha ha thanks man a bunch i really appreciate it that you got back to me n shit. I was wondering where you were and its chill dood i understand you were busy and shit but thanks for the review man ill try some of that shit out i like the idea of the snare also like you said.. if you like this song tho i have come out with a lot more songs so you should check those out too ive got a lot better songs than this one
the melody is realy inspiring and original.
litlle techno feeling finishing it.
keep on going with the original melodies
yo thanks a bunch dood and if you like this song you should check out a few more of em i make more techno and i also make some okay hip hop beats too... i even have some shit were i play my guitar .. thanks for the review and like i said you should check out some more of my music ill check out yours
is great, relaxing :p
bit tired and bit drunk to type whole review, but it is great ^^
not much to change :p
brw, check out my latest song! vote x review maybe ^^
fo sho dood thanks a lot for the review lol and word on being drunk i wish i didnt drink all my alcohol last night otherwise id be getting drunk right now lol