Even though it is a loop, it still needs too have alot happening.
This sounds like maybe 2 instruments stacked on each other.
You do have some good instruments in there, however.
This kind of sounds like more of an experiment though, unfortunately.
There wasn't really much substance to it at all. And the few key parts that were there didn't match at all. They sounded awful, to be honest.
its a loop punk
You know in its own way it has some beauty. I don't know i could hear this in a flick or something when something goes completely haywire in a work station or something like that. Or a brain dead monkey throws poop at people hah.. All in all it could be better but i can see use for this.
no, and i dont 'use keys'
I think I fail to catch the meaning or the rhythm
If you managed to work a bit with the keys and probably take everything else out it might sound good
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.