For a first submission, that's awesome, man. 5/5, 10/10 and so forth. I think you should make it longer, and add some pads in there. Try expanding the guitar into more of a solo, maybe add a rhythm guitar to make the song sound more "full."
Thank you very much!
My review, your song.
Intro with some heavy distorted drums, I'm happy so far.
Lo-fi bass at 0:10, still liking. Mix is alright, not noticing any serious clipping issues or unintentional distortion.
0:28 Higher synth addition, songs building nicely.
0:36 Guitars lo-fi, not a sound I like, but it fits pretty well in this song.
1:03 nice minimalist section here, this songs progressing quite nicely.
1:20 Lead guitar and bass guitar I think hit some discordant notes, unsure if thats mistakes, intentional or not, but it simply didn't sound too goo to me.
The pure synth around 1:50 has a very nice contrasting clearness to it. Explosive drums maintain my interest.
Outro is simple but evident, and the song loops well.
Of the four songs you have uploaded, this ones my favorite of them, as well as the most original / best done. Hope you continue in this direction.
I know you probably hear this a lot, but thank you for the great review. Really. Couldn't be more helpful to me as a newbie.
I appreciate it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.