it needs some raw synths this one is on its way man. needs some raw saws and stuff.
Beat is nice, as is the piano you've got going. However, it's a little too simple. A hi-hat, a bass line, and some more background noise could really make this stand out.
Also, Good job on keeping it short. this is about 1 minute's worth of music here. I hate it when people have a 5 minutes song thats the same thing over and over again.