The overall idea is very good. Yet, it still requires a bit of work. As ZStriefel said it lacks drums and lead. If you add them it'll sound great.
damn sorry you got attacked by zero bombers! I liked this hella much! it just needs a little something extra..a lead and some drums! then it would be perfect.
great job! 4/5 8/10
this is pretty good. i've finally found something unique.