The first thing I noticed was that the drums don't fit at all. It's like a rap beat but the instruments are clearly leaning more towards techno. Sometimes it's possible to pull this off, but the rest of the loop has so little structure that it just doesn't fit.
The lead is okay, but becomes very boring very fast. It's way too repetitive. The other instruments that come in are okay, but they fall under the same problem. They could also benefit from some reverb and/or delay to kind of beef them up a little.
Keep working. You're on the right track.
what part of the drums? the kick? the clap? the what? help me improve!!