well, for starters...
the major problem with this song is that every seems off key, and instrmentation need a definate reworking, because this song just doesnt seem to fit together like it should be... I dont wanna rate because this version of the song is to much of an early one to have any real rating, so whatever I give it, it actually is just a random click of my mouse.
really needs more instrumentation, but i suppose thats why its a demo =P
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.