wawswaws
Nice vocals dude
realy suits the song
5/5
10/10
And if u dont mind on cheking my latest rock song? :P
thnx ^^
Keep up the good work dude
Author Comments
Zero Bombers, what pleasure do you get from clicking 0. What do you think will happen, the worlds hottest chick's gonna come out of your computer screen and fuck you till kingdom come? More like a fuckin puppy.
Hey, i finally have completely finished this bastard. Taken me a while. Oh well I hope you guys enjoy. If you want me to add vocals to anything of yours I'd be happy too :). Just send me a message. I just want some more vocal projects, and tbh, I can't be bothered to go looking :)
If you don't like my vocals, then take a look at just the instrumental version here:
http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/258512 (With no space)
The lyrics were just lyrics that I wrote before i even started this song, i just changed them so that they still made sense and fit the song. I did totally delete some parts and write new ones, but most of it is still the same.
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Here they are anyway:
I'm lost in the darkness
I'm Lost inside my head
Walkin' through this baron wasteland
All is lost except my hate for you
The demon rises from beneath the earth
Pools of blood in your hands
Chorus:
This story has been foretold to many times
But no one even cared
Humanity left a scar to open up the skies
And end all life
The crack in the wall to my sanity
Opens up to hell
Pain rains down from the skies
Living flesh turned to dust
The silhouette of pain in the clouds of hell
Wreak havoc back on earth
(Chorus)
(Solo)
(Chorus)
Consider the lives
Of who you are about to end
God won't help us now
We're too far into hell
Walk with me through the demon mist
Unmask all the dead
Walk with me through the clouds of hell
Death was foretold
Heaven overturned by hell
Earth engulfed by the flames
Blood from the heavens rains down on earth
The gods can't help us now
I'm living in the darkness
I have lost my mind
Falling down in this baron wasteland
All hope taken out my grasp
The demon descends beneath the earth
No more damage can be done
(Chorus x2)
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Zero bombers go get stabbed and run home to cry to your mummys
Enjoy Everyone...
From You very own Slut...
Netty Swobb
netty-swobb responds:
Thanks man! Sure i'll check ur song :)
nice one!
i like it even that it isn't my genre! :D
just the way you made this song is awesome haha :D
and i DO like the vocals :D
nice one here ;)
keep it up!
btw, check out my last song if you don't mind ? ^^ drop a review or something so i know what you think :D
netty-swobb responds:
Cheers man! I will check out your song :)
meh
peh
netty-swobb responds:
Yeeeeeaaaaaah...
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yeah, i have to agree about the vocal/instrumental mix. doesn't go together flawlessly. the actual vox are good though, and i still think it's well mixed. personally i liked the echoing. also the intro/4:30-riff sounds really badass, i like it. good job, keep em coming
netty-swobb responds:
Thanks! As i said, i suck at mixing and mastering vocals. Definately my weakest point. Thanks for checking ;)
Good shit dude
Vocals were a bit weird sounding, not the vocals themselves, but their position in the mix. It REALLY sounded like a metal song and a vocal track playing at the same time, not one complete song :/
Also, I think the vocals had too much reverb or something, they were sounding a bit echo-ish.
Anyways, pretty bitchin' stuff here. I could go for some epic leads overtop of it all though ;)
If you have the time, would you care to review my latest song? That'd be awesome :)
netty-swobb responds:
Cheers dude. I'm not very good at mixing and mastering vocals, maybe they're a bit too loud. Meh. And 'bout the vocals being echo-ish, that's because the effect I use is echo. I turned it up in the bridge cos i thought that sounded cool :)
Sure thing dude, i'll check your song out :)
Credits & Info
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- Faves:
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- Downloads
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- Votes
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- Score
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4.81 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Aug 13, 2009
- 3:52 PM EDT
- Genre
- Heavy Metal
- File Info
- Song
- 6.8 MB
- 7 min 26 sec
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