Meh.

You definatly need to fine tune this some more. Mabye add a little more bass, it sounds a bit soft. Not to mention the different beats fighting eachother all the time, if you know what I mean. Above all I would fix the beats so that they work together smoothly. At the moment it sounds very rough.

its alright

its ok but not great. the beat seems to get off and the main melody seems to be all over the place but it has its moments