He's right, the intro is boring...not to sound mean :(
The rest of the song is really good, I read your response to Fang and I think you should make an edit, ya know, improve on some stuff and fix the begining.
great job, though
look in the beggining it's very boring. Most ppl would stop listning after about a few secs. So you should make the beggining more interesting. I was going
I agree, I did this song 5 years ago and havent made it any better, sory you got giped out of a good listing experance