Needs a little work, but good start!
First off, I like the concept. I can feel it, but there are a couple things that detract a little from my experience. One, some of the synth chords are a little off-key. This has such a positive vibe, and yet when you use a minor chord, it ruins the mood for me. Also, it seems that its mastered quite a bit too loud. I get a ton of clipping, not from my headphones, but because the levels are a bit too high. Keep building, keep working, this is a great start and can only get better with some work! Keep it real!
i work on it ;D
I love the tasty synth dissonance on top of the kickin drum beat. Keep it up :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.