The beginning is ok. But when these quiet strings enter I have a feeling that they are not in rythm. Then, there are too many repetition of this motive. I think there is something missing. You are repeating the main motive too many times. And the base is always the same. These repeating strings. Try to think about lot of changes, because the piece is more interesting then. Of course, if you want people to remember your melody you need to repeat it. But don't repeat it just like that. Make something new, some new parts with elements of this theme, but different. Make a different orchestration. Use your imagination to create a break between one repetition and another. You can change a key too, for example do some modulation to a higher key. However I'm giving you 7, cause there is a theme and harmony and lot of instruments. But I think you should listen to classical composers and read about instrumentation, because you have lot of things you need to learn. Try to think about what I've said. :)
The song sounds good overall
But the name doesn't apply to the music, the title "Wander through the night" is more solemn and more scary or relaxing. For this song, Try "War of centuries" or "The begginning" or whatever. But the song sounds good.
quit touching but its good. deserves front page lol
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