If you actually, say, sang the vocals, this song would be improved drastically. You automatically get points for doing it yourself, and actually singing, but you lost them again for doing a bad job of it. The instrumentals are fantastic, and the lyrics too, but you need to work on the singing. The recording quality was a bit shabby, too.
thanx, like i told that human down there, i haven't sung that way much before, first attempt...thanx, lyrics are very important to us, as is musical epic-ness haha
i really enjoyed this song. the only thing that got me was the vocals. it sounds like you were trying to go for something more like screaming. the lyrics themselves are good and they go with the song but theres alot more that could be done with this... keep up the good work!!
thanx, this was actually my first attempt at that style, wan't sure what ta do, but im practicin and ill let you know when i get a better version up....
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