You CAN CAN CAN, Yes you CAN CAN CAN CAN CAN!
There's nothing wrong with the song itself, I can see what you were going for, I just think you might be a little tone deaf. If you check out some scales and see how notes should go together you'll be all set. It is nice to see another fan of eurogate though, I almost thought you stole "DJM- Haze" for a second at the beginning.
I made the eurogate myself :D with at techno sounding sound
Heh at first I thought you stole it but then came so many loose ends that there was no way it was stolen. Well if it is your own creation is deserver 10 at least for effort you put it in that thing cuz you can feel a bit of spiriti in it. Not too repetetive too
I made it :D