Excellent instruments, they fit perfectly with the song. The reverse cymbal that first appeared at the beginning was really awesome, and the intro was extraordinary. The bass was repetitive though and although it fit very well to the song, it didn't change at all. This song needs some more drums around it in my opinion. The drum beat started at 1:15 and ended at 2:27, but was very simple. That drum beat should start at about 0:46, a more complicated beat between 1:15 and 2:27, and at the end some quiet high hats or ride bell cymbals. Also, I think this needs more of a melody to it. The melody it has now is awesome, but some fast notes somewhere, would fit pretty well. The piano parts were quite cool, but need a few chords and faster notes. Still, the ending was good, the instruments chosen were perfect, fits the name very well, and is relaxing and awesome at the same time. Even though it has a few flaws, I really enjoyed it, so keep up the great work!
Thank you for the informative review! I will take note of the flaws and do a better job next time, I'm still an amateur at these things... and I do apologize for that.
Nice work really good chords, Releaxing trance tune, good bassline, The thing about the track got abit empty afterawile not much change then a piano, But its ok even could been some more plucked melody or so. Anyway i hear the piano has abit to high volyme in the track almost abit to high try turn volyme down alittle and add some nice add melody to the song this would be much better.
keep on working /TN
Thank you for your informative critique! I do apologize for the simple and empty melody. I've noticed that it needed something more, but I couldn't think of anything. I apologize again for the loud piano, I should have noticed it earlier. I will take note of the flaws that you have stated and make better songs in the near future. Thank you again for your review!