This is heat
It made me think of victory , flashing lights and old school movies ha ha. That's a good thing :) 10/10 5/5 fav'd
It seems to be a good, solid piece.
Hip hop wouldn't be my best grounds to get extremely technical with though. I still think this is a good backdrop and could be used by some of the best hip hop artists in the entire business, Honestly.
Although, I think your biggest flaw in this was the sound that came across as a bit of a screeching noise, or a screaming style thing, Hard to put my finger on it. It came in every 10 seconds or so, I saw no need for this, And think it just made it sound silly at times.
Overall though, Excellent :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.