well if your relized
im trying to give all of yer songs at least one review. If i missed 1 or 2,sry.
Its good, but the snare build up u have b4 the 2 parts play together, the snare is way to low.
and the lyrics need work but they r good.
i can't really say anything else, thats about all that happened in the song.
Thanks blackhawk again. I really do enjoy reading your reviews. You seem to see the entire structure of a song just through listening and you also give very helpful critism.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.