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Quiet background music.
It's ok but is lacking something and I'm not sure what.
If anyone knows how I could make it better, feedback woulb be appreciated.

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Even if it's lacking in terms of a song, the track itself would be great in a VN or something...
I'll most likely be adding this to the VN i'm working on :D


Nayhan responds:

~gratitude~


Nice tune...

Hey, nice tune you got there...

It inspired me, so I just did some tweaking on top of it, adding what I thought it was lacking... It may sound a bit electronic and out of place for you.

It's actually a very good tune as it is, without any additions to it!!!

Check it out on http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/370325


Nayhan responds:

haha awesome


It sounds like...

...it's missing something on the bass side. Maybe add some low tones, or make low tones more prominent. I think a classical bass would fit well in this. Anyway, cool song.


Nayhan responds:

I think your right. I was thinking it needed something on top but a bass would probably add a lot to the song. Thanks for your review :)


Kool ..

is this Last Resort By Papa Roach ?


Nayhan responds:

no... no it isn't...


it lacks a main melody

It sounds great as background music- but without a main melody - for example maybe a flute, or oboe, it seems to lack the feelnig to make it a complete song - I think if you fixed this it would make it complete-

very pretty nonethess though!

-shawn-


Nayhan responds:

Thanks a lot... it's good to get a review from someone who is experienced in the field. I doubt I'll ever get around to adding stuff to this. I thought I needed to add more background stuff but yea it probably needs a lead of some sort.

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Nayhan
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Uploaded
Aug 7, 2009
9:35 PM EDT
Genre
Ambient
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3 MB
3 min 19 sec

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