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Uploaded
Aug 7, 2009 | 4:09 AM EDT
File Info
Song
4.4 MB
6 min 29 sec
Score
3.66 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 3.66 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
989 Plays | 58 Downloads
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - General Rock
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Author Comments

Can you hear God thinking? I can, and it isn't all Good. So this is my song I sing for Him to hold his finger to the flame, because I know He's listening. If more of us did the same, rather than just praising Him like he's the greatest thing there ever was and brushing off all the evil he's created as the work of a devil, then He'd feel guilty for causing us pain and "hopefully" do something to help us out.

Times a Thousand:

Invisible Being
I can hear you thinking
And what you're planning
Is what you're dreaming Love?
Can you see me alive in your Creation?
Or is my bleeding an unknown to your sensations?
Cunning excuses
It seems you'd have many
So answer this question
Why are you running away from me?

I guess we all have a Destiny?
Do you sometimes wonder: Have I found my own?
And how did you right Reality with a pen filled with rabbit holes?

Words are empty to who can't hear them
Light breaks where no Son shines, so the Darkness swallows Him
A meaning in your name, but it's hidden
Tied to those woven into your life

I could tell you the Truth a thousand times, but you won't listen
I could tell you the Truth a thousand times, but you won't listen

I could show you how the World was made
And that it took longer than six or seven days
Yet you opened up your Book and prayed
And told me what the Preacher said

I could tell you the Truth a thousand times, but you won't listen
I could tell you the Truth a thousand times, but you won't listen

I guess we all have our fantasies
Have you ever wandered passed the edge of your own?
And how would you judge personality in a lab filled with rats and moles?

Words are ending
Can you hear them?
Light breaks where no sun shines and the cold air's frozen
A meaning to place blame, and it's growing
Spells woven in your life keep it flowing through events that unravel Fate's crime

I would show you what the future holds
And all the souls I so easily scold
Yet my heart is just as cold as warm

I would show you the Code to Life
And that Freedom of Choice is nothing but a lie

I would tell you the Truth a thousand times, but you won't listen
I should tell you the Truth a thousand times; it's what you're missing

Reviews


Bad-Man-IncorporatedBad-Man-Incorporated

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Cool.

This is a pretty cool tune. You should bring up the vocals just a tad, as the other instruments drown you out a bit, but I enjoyed this a lot.

Current Score

5.00 / 5.00 (+ 5.00)


WitchWyzwurd responds:

This is a draft, since I'm mixing down with 5-inch speakers on my 1989 Logik carry-along boom box... lol! Sounds kick-ass through it though, but in other systems, not so prime. I'll be getting some decent monitors soon and I'll pin down the mix.

Thanks for the compliments and critique. Seeing as you voted me a 5.00 (which I appreciate), and that as of now there's only 2 votes, and my score is 2.89, someone must've not liked it as much as you.

Wish they would've submitted a text-response, so I could understand their point-of-view better.